Thursday 11th August 2011
WALT:explane
What happen's when your a sleep
I think it has a good criteria because... -It has very descriptive words for example: - secondly your body slows down - embarrassing moments yesterday .It is based on a interesting subject It is something we don’t tend to know alot about as kids because it is not something you think about often.
-it is in paragraphs and has one main idea per paragraph for example: - the second paragraph is about the habits some people have when they are sleeping like sucking your thumb, grinding your teeth or peddling your legs
Tuesday 23 august 2011
WALT explan
dreaming
Finally while you are sleeping you also dream. Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep. Nobody knows what their dreams mean. you can you are doing that is out of the is world I don’t think our dreams mean anything. They are just there to keep us busy while we are asleep. This is what happens when we are asleep
WALT:explane
What happen's when your a sleep
I think it has a good criteria because...
-It has very descriptive words
for example:
- secondly your body slows down
- embarrassing moments yesterday
.It is based on a interesting subject
It is something we don’t tend to know alot about as kids because it is not something you think about often.
-it is in paragraphs and has one main idea per paragraph
for example:
- the second paragraph is about the habits some people have when
they are sleeping like sucking your thumb, grinding your teeth or peddling your legs
Tuesday 23 august 2011
WALT explan
dreaming
Finally while you are sleeping you also dream. Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep. Nobody knows what their dreams mean. you can you are doing that is out of the is world I don’t think our dreams mean anything. They are just there to keep us busy while we are asleep. This is what happens when we are asleep
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